Mmm. I can’t find the shadow of a reasonable excuse to go and see this. To your honest credit, I think, you don’t create one. I wonder why you’d publish it (but would not want to argue the case for it is your book - and this would make for a long discussion about them, you, the readers … in the pub, let alone at the keyboard).
yeah, I just reread it and I think you're right. It's lost something in the edit from its original message, which was more disparaging of the whole scene and made a comment on whether we should criticise the culture form the outside. I may add that back in as it does seem sanitised on the reread. thanks for you comment.
Mmm. I can’t find the shadow of a reasonable excuse to go and see this. To your honest credit, I think, you don’t create one. I wonder why you’d publish it (but would not want to argue the case for it is your book - and this would make for a long discussion about them, you, the readers … in the pub, let alone at the keyboard).
yeah, I just reread it and I think you're right. It's lost something in the edit from its original message, which was more disparaging of the whole scene and made a comment on whether we should criticise the culture form the outside. I may add that back in as it does seem sanitised on the reread. thanks for you comment.
Done! I put back in what the editor took out - they love sanitising don't they...
Great stuff Charlie , I’m enjoying it so much even when the content is quite painful reading.
The pics are brilliant too. Well done!